She whispered, “they’re right behind you.”
10 points
The look on her face was a combination of fear and disguest. She said I’m not allowed back to the library.
Thinking this was my first visit, I asked why.
She leaned in and whispered “You know why!”
5 points
Accidentally read the punchline first. I think it made it funnier.
3 points
Solid.
3 points
Serious chuckle.
2 points
Ooh, I gotta remember this!