Ah. I think the moustache needs to be wider for that. Also, a label might be in order. Ron Toasterson or something.
Agreed, wider and thicker with maybe a wavy/ ridge texture on the bottom half of the mustache and slight rounding/flaring on the sides that narrows to the top.
https://pbs.twimg.com/profile_images/1262480275/ron-swanson-250fp011911_400x400.jpg
Feels like that’s a good reference pic for OP.
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But I do prefer #2 more. Like others have said, it’s simpler and easier to tell the expression.