cross-posted from: https://feddit.de/post/6258115
New story, I hope you like it. Feedback always welcome.
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Thanks. So nice to hear some feedback <3
You are right about the story. I crafted the whole thing a bit more hasty than the last ones. It should be longer and have an actual story and maybe some new characters. I also need to improve my writing. I tried a more playful style for this one, because its adventerous and so on, but its too inconsistent.
I’m thinking about extending and re-writing it, but am not sure if I will find the time. Thanks anyways :)
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You’re very welcome ☺️ I don’t always have the mental energy to read a thing, but I look forward to seeing more in the future and seeing how your style evolves!
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